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A Light Breeze

Sings like the wind, the notes collide;
producing serenades above.
Adrift, sweet sounds are floating by –
melodic songs coo, like a dove.
Swirling veil entwined with the breeze,
silk white dress embracing her form.
Dances freely beneath the trees,
as soulful moonlight keeps her warm.
Spirit so free, no thoughts to grieve
harmony – deep within her heart.
Radiant glow – midsummer’s eve;
a vision of exquisite art.
Beauteous angel – beacon light,
safe passage on this twisted road.
Future unknown – brighten the night
with your light upon me, bestowed.
-TheMsLvh © 2011

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  1. July 4, 2011 at 5:17 pm

    stunning imagery.

    • July 4, 2011 at 5:18 pm

      Thank you for your kind words Jingle

  2. July 4, 2011 at 9:24 pm

    I hope she sings to me in my sleep because that read like a beautiful song. :)

  3. July 6, 2011 at 6:40 am


  4. July 6, 2011 at 11:19 am

    absolutely perfect in every way. truly a brilliant write!

    • July 6, 2011 at 11:21 am

      Thank you for your very kind comment Luna16!

  5. July 7, 2011 at 1:18 pm

    love love this one one and the photo too. I do hope this angel sings me to sleep tonight as well bc for sure I will sleep quite well .beautiful.

  6. July 9, 2011 at 5:01 pm

    you have talent in writing for kids.

    invite you to take our week 5 writing challenge,
    anything comes to mind would be awesome to share,
    hope to see your in.
    Happy Saturday.

  7. September 12, 2011 at 9:27 am

    Very different from the previous piece. I enjoyed the fantasy element here.

  8. September 12, 2011 at 2:32 pm

    This is love, the light melodic feel about it carries it along beautifully

  9. September 12, 2011 at 2:37 pm

    Different, but lovely!

  10. September 12, 2011 at 3:33 pm

    Glorious! Loved it.

  11. September 12, 2011 at 7:29 pm

    fairy tale-esque.
    your last graph was the strongest.

  12. September 13, 2011 at 7:11 am

    So lovely, and very nicely done!

    • September 13, 2011 at 8:14 am

      Hi Shanys, Thank you for your visits and I followed you back to your new blog site and found your writing really beautiful. Thanks you for visiting and letting me discover a gem …your blog writing site.

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