Haiku #1
Truly life is hard
but it can be lived easy
Fly, but don’t hit trees
-TheMsLvh
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You are on your way.
Great last line
fly, take detours..
well done.
:)
I wish I were a bird. The trees are there for R&R en route! And birds don’t have to queue for hours to go through those awful security procedures. See how your haiku has made me think! Sign of a good haiku.
Happy you liked it!
You are off to a smashing start. Watch out for that tree!
*laughing*
good advice =)
Interesting. I have a friend who is a haiku poet and I have as yet not managed to get one that she really thinks is haiku. She is very exacting about the way a haiku should be written – which is good for me – I like to learn and master new things. Hopefully one day I will be satisfied and my friend as well. :)
To be honest, it is not my preference, Haiku. I just threw that up for a challange.
Love it all – superb observation!
Anna :o]
;-) I like the humour. It reminds me of a series of lithographs done by artist Claire Kujundzic in Wells, BC http://www.claireart.ca/magcat3.htm Can’t help but smile when you see them, just like the last line of your haiku!
My poetic offering is at http://shawnbird.com/2011/07/18/summer-rain/
Beautiful uplifting poem =)
masterful job.
Greetings:
Welcome sharing your poetry with us today.
Poems that are old but need more attention, poems related to nature and life are welcome.
Keep up the excellence.
Hope to see you linked in and share.
BEST!
xoxox
Your haiku caught the moment.
Today – in my garden, I had to look up:
Three curlews flew high overhead,
calling in a blue sky.
Two parents and a child?
Where are the others from that clutch?
I wonder if that might distill into haiku.
best regards
Harry
Excellent post.
Happy Holidays….
I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
1 to 3 or more are welcome.
no theme.
Hope to see you in,
Smiles!