Bewilderment – a Sonnet
I slept on sand within your sweet embrace
the warmth your skin emits entices me
I lost perception of all time and space
as waves of your soft voice invite the sea
Horizon glowed with sparks of fireworks
the flash of light emblazoned your deep eyes
you canvassed landscapes on my soft bare perks
and felt rewarded by your captured prize
Bewildered silent words that could not say
those thoughts which left us fearing danger zone
a road not certain in this game of play
to take a risk with love and not postpone
Bewilderment excites within you deep
and leaves me longing you on this blind leap
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- TheMsLvh © 2011
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I received an award from for this Sonnet from:
The Perfect Poet Award of Poets Rally Week 48 located at Promising Poets’ Poetry Cafe
The honor is mine
My poem was received well
Thank you for reading
I would like to nominate CC Champagne
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Nice sonnet. Romance is a great thing. Kelp isn’t… smiles…
Dont understand the kelp thing, but the sea lions love it.
Enjoyed!
Yes, sometimes love is all about taking those risks with our heart. Lovely romantic prose.
Thank you
true words, beautiful entertainment piece.
My first attempt to write a sonnet. Happy you liked it
I saw the word sonnet and had to look, and I wasn’t disappointed. Terrific first piece.
Lovely sonnet. Makes me think of summer loves.
I enjoyed reading this piece very much :)
Beautiful – the image just worked wonderfully with the poem – I loved it.
Stunning sonnet, and image to match :) loved it.
My poem ~ A Poetic World
Wow beautiful sensual sonnet loved it
I was just commenting about your writing. I am thrilled you loved my first sonnet.
Awesome poetry & pic!
very passionate piece… ! nothing to complain about..:)
A romantic one! Loved it :)
Very passionate poetry, the imagery is simply superb! Excellent work my friend
Wow! A beautiful sonnet on love, passion, danger, risk, excitement!
An amazing piece of work for any proper English sonnet. All the more amazing for a first one.
I have your guidence to thank. The tutorials you gave me, I was able to put it all together and come up with this.
A lovely poem colored with emotions. :)
way to go,
well deserved award, thanks for the perfect acceptance and nomination.
:)
Well done on the award!!! Fully deserved, given to a wonderful poet! And, playing on the name of the poem, can I just add: Bewilderment – the nomination! *blushing smile*
You deserved it..the nomination CC.
Greetings:
Hope all is well.
Noting that you have won the perfect poet award for week 58,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!
Come join our poetry rallyby Friday if you wish to mingle and get inspired!
A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.
xoxox