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Can You Relate? (rant)
Spare the Rod… Please?

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To the Wood – a Sonnet

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Haiku #1
Truly life is hard
but it can be lived easy
Fly, but don’t hit trees
-TheMsLvh
dVerse

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In Tibet – Ghazal style
This style of poetry is known as Ghazal. The Ghazal was developed in Persia in the 10th century AD from the Arabic verse form qasida. A number of American poets, including Adrienne Rich and W.S. Merwin, have written Ghazals, usually without the strict pattern of the traditional form.
A traditional Ghazal consists of five to fifteen couplets, typically seven. A refrain (a repeated word or phrase) appears at the end of both lines of the first couplet and at the end of the second line in each succeeding couplet. In addition, one or more words before the refrain are rhymes or partial rhymes. The lines should be of approximately the same length and meter. Absolutely no enjambment allowed! The poet may use the final couplet as a signature couplet, using his or her name in first, second or third person, and giving a more direct declaration of thought or feeling to the reader.
Each couplet should be a poem in itself, like a pearl in a necklace. There should not be continuous development of a subject from one couplet to the next through the poem ( I might of). The refrain provides a link among the couplets, but they should be detachable, quotable, grammatical units. There should be an epigrammatic terseness, yet each couplet should be lyric and evocative.

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Old Bones Give Way – a Villanelle
One traditional form of poetry that can be fun to write, is technically easy compared to the most challenging forms, and often surprises the poet with its twists and discoveries, is the villanelle.
Villanelles have been around for at least three hundred years. .
My poem has three beats to a line (ta-DUM, ta-DUM, ta-DUM), not so traditional five(ta-DUM, ta-DUM, ta-DUM, ta-DUM, ta-DUM). But it is all good because this is a flexible poetic form and my first Villanelle poem.

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Flash in Time
Submitted -http://dversepoets.com/2011/09/15/meeting-the-bar-critique-and-craft-approach-notes/ @ dVerse Poets Pub

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Hold Her Gently, She’s Fragile


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Bewilderment – a Sonnet


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I received an award from for this Sonnet from:
The Perfect Poet Award of Poets Rally Week 48 located at Promising Poets’ Poetry Cafe
The honor is mine
My poem was received well
Thank you for reading








